Wednesday, November 27, 2013

Sentence of the Day: Oh, Lord!

I grieve for the Richmond Times Dispatch:

"Had Marshall won, he probably would have lost to Warner even more badly than Gilmore did."


Could this sentence have been structured more badly or, perhaps, more goodly? Thank god it's an unsigned editorial, but the people in the building know who wrote it. My guess is the writer is out sick today. Let's hope.

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